2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

Over-proteced flower There are two pictures illustrating that one flower grows up in a warm house which protects it from rain and thunder, but when the warm house is gone, the flower must face the rain and storm alone, the flowers withered at a short time. Those pictures means more than what we looked, in contemporary society, an increasing number of children are fragile just as those flowers because of parents' spoiling. It's manifest that these children can't grow up healthily, which gives adults a warning that a man can never be a real man before he can work out difficulties alone. Parents should give children the normal concern.