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How Should Parent Help Children to Be Independent Nowadays,most of the parents spoiled their child and that lead to a result their children become more and more dependent on their parents.In a word, without their parents they can do nothing.As summer draws to a close,many parents are facing the tough task of outfitting a college-bound teen for dorm life for the first time.How should parents help children to be independent that is what we are discussing. Why the children so depend on their parents is that they don't get exercise because of the parent's spoil,they do nothing at home So in my opinion,to make the children get independent.At first the parents should have faith in the children instead of worrying if they could manage.You should trust them in action.Second,in the daily life,the parents should ask the children do some housework such as clean the room and wash dishes or clothes.Please keep it in mind,practice makes perfect.What's more is that the parents should often encourage their children to do their own things by their selves. As we all know,the child to be independent has a long period and the parent plays a very important role for their children.During the period,only the parents be strict with their child,the child can be independent step by step
