2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

文中从句的使用的有点少了；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文中拼写错误稍多，词汇表达贫乏。

when we stay home with our family member lovely,we feel happy and great. when we do something we intrested in ,we feel excited. when we see the sundowning on the far from top hill harnifol this is the value of the life,we can feel the opiscal \pleasure from . we enlish the gray from the social and the world ,capeture the undersing lise,we see ,we can do it