2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

In china, there are many interesting place. For example, Jiuzhaigou Guilin...I am going to tell my foreign friends to trip at the Jiuzhaigou. There are many strange and beautiful scenery, you can see the interesting animals beautiful plants elegant mountains and clear rivers, she will fell as if she in a scroll of china landscape painting.I believe that my foreign friends will marvel at the scenery of the Jiuzhaigou .