2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

从句数量偏少；采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视。

The MId-Autumn Festival,one of the most important day of chinese,is one of traditional festival of china.At the day,on 15 septemper of lunar calendar each year,members of family will get together form everywhere to have a meal which used to be called "tuanyuanfan".The family will enjoy the full moon when the moon rise in the sky at night,meanwhile,everyone will eat some moon cake under the moonlight.Of course,someone have a journey or visit friends at the Mid-Festival,and so on.