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2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:40浏览次数:9753
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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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In the recent years, human activities have posed more and more severe threat to our environments, such as plants, animal species and so forth. Facing these series of environment problems, how should we do? Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem, which is pessimistic and exerts a negative influence on others. I suppose we should avoid this negative point to tackle any problem. Others believe the effective measures should be taken to improve this situation, which is consistent with me. From my own perspective, diverse measures should be taken to prevent people from environment destruction.

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