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In recently, the development of the technology has made lots of the ground to disappered. The increasing population of the human causes the aeras of the diseart enhanced every year. The dangerous animals are also missing. There is no double that the human activities have chance the balance of the plants and animal species. There are some said mind that the missing animals can not be stoped. The warming weather will make the huamn to be dasappered. Now, it is too late to change this phonomana. In contrast, there are also some people consist to driving a serous methods to changed the bad effect of the human activities. I agree this idera. The negative effect on plants and animal species can be solved because the world government has made lots of methos to change this condition.
