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文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；作者词汇表达恰当，同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇；从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误。
Recently, the development of the technology has made lots of the ground to disappear. The increasing population of the human causes the areas of the desert enhanced every year. The dangerous animals are also missing. There is no double that the human activities have changed the balance of plants and animal species. There are some said minds that the missing animals can not be stopped. The warming weather will make the human to disappear. Now, it is too late to change this phenomenon. In contrast, there are also some people who consist driving a series of methods to change the bad effect of the human activities. I agree with this idera. The negative effect on plants and animal species can be solved because the world government has made lots of methods to change this condition.
