小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；文章词汇不够丰富，但单词拼写要认真检查。

My good friend is wangfei.she has black hair and big eys,she looks like beautiful.we often go to shopping together,and we shar delicious food each other,she likes smile ,i like her personelity ,she aways take some happy to me.someday if she aewy from me ,i will be very sad,and still remeber her.