小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；文中从句使用不丰富；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

My new teacher is a english teacher,she looks very beautiful,she has black hair and two big eyes,.her voice is good,she likes play piano and reading books.she will be angry when we have not finished our homework.and she will be seirously when we made some mistake.but im sure she loves our.we love my english teacher too.