正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;请作者增加词汇丰富度,希望作者能够较为熟练的使用高级词汇;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
My school is very beautiful. It is in Guicheng, near the Qiandeng Lake. Do http://www.pigai.org/res/images/jkpg.gifyou know it? It is Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I like my school very much.¡¡¡¡ There is a big playground in my school. We have P.E. class on the playground and we often play sports on it , too. Our teaching building has five floors. My classroom is on the fifth floor. It is big and clean. The computer rooms are on the third floor. There is a library on the second floor. There are many books in the library. I often read books here. There are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too. The teachers in my school are very kind . The students are very polite and smart. I am happy in my school.