采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。
A quice conclusion is not sensitive with the rapid growth of society, human get more hurry in life than last epoch.in my opinion, they have the wrong ideal about that a quick conclusion can be a evidence for their smart brain or be a sufficient way to get things down faster. In fact, this would be the crucial point for everyone's success. here are some tips to illustrate my thought from all above. First of way, the message you heard or the scene you saw is not always be the turth. in other words, you don't know the message which part can be trust. second, a way let everyone trust you are smart is to have a percisive consideration then make a real conclusion. last but not least, the whole things in the world is not simply for just one word.it will take much time to understand what this is. from all above, we have to understand that get a conclusion after have some words or some pictures is not smart. what should we do ? do some experiment and serch it on internet is nesessary for a sensitive conclusion.
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