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Some people think that the children should do the same job as their parents because this is the better way to inherit their good cause. Many others, however, think that the children also to try the different job what they want. Do the same job with parents have numerous benefits. For one thing, it is easy to get good career for children because the children only walk on their parents' old way. they do not need to waste time on that how to choice or find job. Also, children can get some advances which can not get it from other person. parents will teach themhow to do the good job and adviod the wrong side. Finally, when the children do work easily they also can do other thing they like. Do the different job with parents still have benefits. First, they will have more activety for their job because that is their own chioce. The best thing for children is that let them do what they want. Second, with technology development, more and more old job will dissappare. the children may could not find a job if the job do not needed. There is nothing wrong with to do the same job with the parents or not. For the best possible option, though, interesting is the good teacher for children.