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Some people think that the children should do the same job as their parents because this is the better way to inherit their good career. Many others, however, think that the children also to try the different job what they want. Do the same job with parents have numerous benefits. For one thing, it is easy to get a good career for children because the children only walk on their parents' old way. They do not need to waste time on that how to choice or find a job. Also, children can get some advances who can not get it from others. Parents will teach them how to do the good job and avoid the wrong side. Finally, when the children do work easily they can also do anything they like. Do the different job with parents still have benefits. First, they will have more activity for their jobs since that is their own choice. The best thing for children is that let them do what they want. Second, with technique development, more and more old job will disappear. The children may not find a job if the job not needed. There is nothing wrong with to do the same job with the parents or not. For the best possible option, though, interest is the capable teacher for children.