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Peter
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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
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Dear Peter, Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think you can play games for a while after you finish your homework. But you mustn't spend too much time on it.Don't be too sad about it. Let me give your some advice. First, you should stop arguing with your parents. Arguing with them can't make things get better. It can only make you even angrier. Remember that your parents love you deeply. Second, you should understand your parents. Playing computer games too much is really bad for your study. Third, you can have a talk with your parents. You can tell them that you won't play too long and playing some games can make you relaxed. And in this way, I'm sure you will get on well with your parents soon.
