作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。
Different people from different places in a country may speaking diverse dialects,like China where enjoys a large population living in many different places.Certainly,there is no doubt the its cultures are very colorful.When people meet each other and have a communication,whether speaking dialects is acceptable or not in public places?As for me,it would be not. Why would it be unacceptable?There are main three reasons to support it.Firstly,China's cultures are diverse and meaningful,in order to get the mutual understanding,people should use the common language,the mandarin,in communication.In mandarin,people can easily know other culture.Also,heading for the convenient life ,people may choose to speak with mandarin.If men have conversations in their own hometown languages with others in public places,misunderstandings might occur while others don't speak the same one like in the ticket hall,the sellers would get the wrong information even cannot get the point.This is the second reason to answer the question.Last but not least,in public places,dialects may be the obstacles of the communication between strangers who may be from diverse cities.Many friends would begin from strangers if they have a common language because they could understand each other. In conclusion,if people use their respective hometown to talk to each other,they would not know other wonderful cultures except his own and it would be a great regret,in the daily life,dialects would impede the regular conversations between men like buying a ticket can be a difficulty and the chances for knowing more knew friends would be less possible.Therefore,in my view,dialects are not accepted.