采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句使用量不足,应增加从句和复合句的使用;高级词汇比较灵活,总体用词较为单一,有一些拼写错误。
With the develpoment of the transport, people who are from all around the world say the same words, but the word presents different means. That the word has varous views in every country in the past, though people who say these words. So that the conflits and misunderstanding can cause the unhummany. Nowadays, the misunderstanding of the word may break the relationship, cause conflicts and make the wrong dicision. The wrong understanding may be missed by the common words. In summary, the common words should be used in the public places in cause of the misleading results by the conversation.