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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10533
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句使用量不足,应增加从句和复合句的使用;文中高级词汇使用较恰当,仍需增加词汇表达灵活性,排除拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

With the development of the transport, people who are all from around the world say the same words, but the word presents different means. That the word has varous views in every country in the past, though people who say these words. So that the conflits and misunderstanding can cause the unhummany. Nowadays, the misunderstanding of the word may break the relationship, cause conflicts and make the wrong dicision. The wrong understanding may be missed by the common words. In summary, the common words should be used in the public places in cause of the misleading results by the conversation.

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