从句使用量不足,应增加从句和复合句的使用;采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达不够丰富,但部分高级词汇用的比较灵活。
With the development of the transport, people who are all from around the world say the same words, but the word presents different means. That the word has various views in every country in the past, though people who say these words. So that the conflits and misunderstanding can cause the disharmony. Nowadays, the misunderstanding of the word may break the relationship, cause conflicts and make the wrong deicision. The wrong understanding may be missed by the common words. In summary, the common words should be used in the public places in cause of the misleading results by the conversation.