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the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication as we all known, computer or the phone have an important role our dairy personal communication.more and more people choose the way of the internet to talk to others rather than face to face.there is no doubt that it is convenient for people to communication.the reason of which is that people would not feel embrassed when face to face ,and they can talk to others with some words that they would not talk to when in object.besides, with the work and technology 's developing , more and more people regards that it is very quickly to send massage to others . but as far as i am concerned , every corns has two sides. we can have advantage from the internet of the interpersonal communication , we also would have disadvantage of this part.nowadays, people would not face to face to communicate ,which is being instead of the internet, which would reduces the chance for people to face to face .however ,it is not very good for our relationship if it is long time not to have a look . i think that it is nesseary for us to balanced the communication between the object and internet .
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