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As is known to all,there are lots of young people enter university or college every year. As for these students,they are excited and happy very much,But as far as their parents concerned,is it really worthy of celebration?i don't think so. more students finance their college by get tuition and fees from their parents.In their eyes,what parents are doing for them is behove,in addition,they think that they have no enough time to do a part time job.But in my opinion,these reason are so funny,because greater part of students didn't work hard,Although they have much spare time,they don't like read books,on the contrary,they spend time in playing with girl friend or other people.Nobady realizes parents' hard all the time. I do hope everybody can finance their own university.Including me!
