2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中从句数量稍显不足，注意个别有错误的句子；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Recently, a phenomenon has appear that there are many goods are over packed.Why this will happened. Some businessman think the beautiful pack can attrack people eyes. Not only will improve the value of the goods, but aslo improve the condition of selling. In my opinion, I do not agree with it. People will buy the goods just because the beautiful pack and even ignore the qulity of the goods. It might be lead a appearance that people are reasonable using the money. More importantly, more people do this will make businessman cost much money to pack their goods which are more and more expensive.