2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

Recently, a phenomenon emerge that many goods are excessive Packging. Why this would take place ? Some businessman think the beautiful pack can attrack people eyes. Not only will improve the value of the goods, but aslo improve the condition of selling. In my opinion, I do not agree with it. People will buy the goods just because the beautiful pack and even ignore the qulity of the goods. It might be lead a appearance that people are reasonable using the money. More importantly, more people do this will make businessman cost much money to pack their goods which are more and more expensive.