2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

Recently, a phenomenon emerges that many goods are excessive Packging. Why this would take place? Some businessman think the beautiful packging can attrack people eyes.Not only will improve the value of the goods, but aslo improve the condition of selling. In my opinion, I do not agree with it. People will buy the goods just because the beautiful pack and even ignore the qulity of the goods. It might be lead a appearance that people are reasonable using the money. More importantly, more people do this will make businessman cost much money to pack their goods which are more and more expensive.