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Recently, a phenomenon emerges that many goods are excessive Packaging. Why this would take place? Some businessmans hold the view that the beautiful packaging can attract people eyes which not only will improve the value of the goods, but also improve the condition of selling. In my opinion, I do not agree with it. People will buy the goods just because the beautiful pack and even ignore the qulity of the goods. It might be lead a appearance that people are reasonable using the money. More importantly, more people do this will make businessman cost much money to pack their goods which are more and more expensive.