2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Recently, a phenomenon emerges that many goods are excessive Packaging. Why this would take place? Some businessmans hold the view that the beautiful packages can attract people eyes which not only will improve the value of the goods, but also improve the condition of selling. From my own perspective, I do not subscribe to it. People will buy the goods just because the beautiful packages and even ignore the quality of the goods. It might be lead an appearance that people are reasonable using the money. More importantly, more people do this will make businessman cost much money to pack their goods which are more and more expensive.