拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者在句法层面做的很棒;过程性词汇偏少。
Recently, a phenomenon emerges that many goods are excessive Packaging. Why this would take place? Some businessmen hold the view that the beautiful packages can attract people eyes which not only will improve the value of the goods, but also improve the condition of selling. From my own perspective, I do not subscribe to it. People will purchase the goods just because the beautiful packages and even ignore the quality of the goods. It might lead an appearance that people are reasonable using the money. More importantly, more people do this will make businessmen spend a lot of money excessive Packaging their goods which the price are more and more highest.