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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;文中衔接词丰富。

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happiness is not determined by what is happening around you,but rather what is happening inside you.Most people depend on others to gain happiness,but truth is,it always comes from within.That means happiness comes from within your heart instead of others or the circumstance around you. In my opinion,that is abosolutely true. If you depend on others to obtain happiness ,you will be at disadvantage and loss yourself.Genuine happiness doesn't lie on driving a fancy race car bought by your parents ,or living in the decorated luxury mansion given by your parents,or receiving a large amount of wealth inherited from your parents.Geunine happiness comes from your own pursuit of the life.If you work hard and try you utmost to earn money,you can drive a car you buy and you can live in a big house for yourself. You can do whatever you want to do.All those success,whether small or big,it wil make you happy. In a word,happiness comes from yourself,your hard work,your persistence in your dream and the creation for your beautiful life.

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