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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3526
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
评语:

作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者词汇表达丰富度较高,就是高级词汇用的太少。

用户练习作文:

About Learning, my opinion is keeping learning even if you are old. But I can't agree that one learns just for a degree. Whether one is young or old. From the begining of our life, we learn everything from the book, from our parents, from our teacher, from the world around us. We must learn how to talk, how to speak, how to communicate with others, how to work with others. To another lever, we should learn how to live in the world, how to get what we want, how to do what we like. This is the only thing we should care, and about a degree or a certificate, or something like that is just a proof that only can show others you've been learned it, but can't show how you can do it well. So, in my opinion, a degree is not the important thing, the ability is.

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