Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;从句数量偏少;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。
From the diagram we can see that,in 2011,with the increase of the degree of education,the person owing a low academic degree may justifiably be oppressed by their earnings. In 2011,there is a large deviation of the unemployment rate and earning from the average.The man’s unemployment rate, are up to the 14.1% ,for the person who has a less than high school diploma,and they earn only about 451$ one week.On the contrary,for the doctor ,the unemployment rate is the lowest,only 2.5%,but the median weekly earning is three times or so as much as the lowest earning. Money does not grow on the trees,just like a saying goes:"no pains,no gains."It can't be denied that the low degree of education is loaded against the earnings.Every so often,the small education pays may give rise to the little money and the high education pays facilitates a good wage.