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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33564
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

As is described in the picture, the man makes use of his computer in the study and he is complaining to his wife that he just feels unfortunate to live in a world with so much misleading information. This picture suggests the harm caused by misleading information online, with which I totally agree. Although through the Internet information can be widely accepted, there are lots of deficiencies of network. The aged-old saying “A coin has two sides” is never truer in technological fields especially in the online word which is virtual and variable. Thus, people are more likely to be agitated by intentional media. For instance, when the earthquake happened in Japan several years ago, the rumor that salts are in short spread all over the Internet, causing great panic and storage of salts. Misleading information online is like a wolf wearing the mask of sheep. It consumes public’s trust and sympathy consequently will lead to social instability and chaos. In conclusion, I sincerely hope that our government can promote supervision and strengthen the penalty on spreading misleading information. We’d better think twice before we choose to trust the message.

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