托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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There's an old saying in China, "Dripping water wears away a stone." That means consistent doing one thing, which can make you powerful, make you stronger day by day. Just like the topic, "Perseverance makes people stronger." In China, there are so many stories about Perserverace. Some of them are fairy tale, some are real. In my childhood, I've ever heard one story, it's called 'YuGong Moves Mountain.' In it, there's an old man by the name of Yu Gong, from the name, in Chinese meaning, that indicates that old man is a fool. His family lives in mountains, and feels no convenient, because they need to climb long distance to get wherever they want. So he made a decision that he wanted to cut a road for his family. At that time, there has not big machine to use, all he can use are his hands. All of his neighbours and his friends didn't understand him, thought he could never do it. But he insisted to do it, and he said, "Even I die, there're my children who can do it, even my children die, their children can continue, some day this road could be done." In this story, we learned one thing, that is "Perseverance makes people stronger." especially to our mind, to our hearts. Above all, we need find what we really want, what we wanna do, what's the thing you should hang on of your whole life, and make it carved in your heart, just like the dripping water, keep going, make your own perseverance.