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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1787
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇使用较丰富,高级词汇使用要加强;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

In school we can learn knowledge and also learn how to work with people, which has a great meaning after his student’s life and even his whole life. For example, some of the west schools usually recommend students think about that what is their human meaning of the goals. Thus the school teachers could know that what is their students whole way of life, what is they fight for, and what is the most valuable things in their life. According to the expressions and body language when they answered, the teachers will know how to help students to improve. And all of this is the internet study could not do it.

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