语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇。
it's unwised that you make a decision when you see some thing or hear something .there are a flood of reasons . first of all,as a saying goes that:"eyes see is not necessarily true"and "words are but wind",if we make a decision on that ,we could make a mistake.secondly,we don't know how the things happened so we couldn't make a wisely decision.last but not least,as a saying goes that:"think twice before you do,you can see a different result.
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