语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积。
It's unwise that you make a decision when you see something or hear something.There is some reasons that I think we should think before make a decision. First of all,as a saying goes that:"the things eyes see is not necessarily true"and "words are but wind",povided that we make a decision on that ,we could make a mistake.Secondly,we don't know how the matters happened so we couldn't make a wise decision.Last but not least,as a saying goes that:"think twice before you do,"you can see a different result.
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