小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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Mrs Song is our new teacher, And she teach us English. Teacher Song has big and bright eyes, her black hair is long. She like in white dress, actually , she is a beauty. She always teach us English texts. Sometimes she teach us English songs and her voice is very well. In fact she is a good teach, we love her.