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小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:32浏览次数:7153
要求:
描述我的新老师。
用户的作文(系统评分55.0分
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正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;结构较为严谨,文中衔接成分很少。

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.My new teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face. Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea. This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

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