语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句和复杂句用的不错,但部分句子还有一些小问题;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇的使用还需加强。
Most people think what they see and hear are true,but i want to tell you everything not simple as it looks like.For example,one person say you are beauty,you may think this guy is a good person,but he maybe just want to gain something from you or want you help him doing something.So nothing is totally like its persume,we must make conclutions by what we see,we hear,we feel and after through our brain.We also can gaven disscusions by surouding people,it can let us do better and smart conclutions.
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