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I am told that my beat friend is gonna visit my birth-born place in few days and I am already well prepared for his soon arriving.The followings are the spectular places i gonna intoduce to him and the reasons why i have always insist on advise people whom are not totally natives to go for a little sightseeing.The first of all,the unforgottabe part of the scenery is the well-planted and fruited forest,which is the first occurs to my mind that would stand up my village's costom through several genarations' favor,you know,nowadays, the greenery has been playing an essencial part in our society but with the developing of the technology and econonic ,on the contratry,the ctizens have not realised the impotance of the grenery thus pay much less attention and make no much contribution to the geenery.Just beacuse what i say above,the environment is lack of protection,so have a great acount of tees aroud my hometown no douth that my village will be become the unique litter town famous for his well-planed and carefully-protested thick forest.And I am truely hopeful that my best friend will enjoy his fantastic moments breathing in this memorial fresh air.
