2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦167:钢琴家

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Langlang is one of the most famous pianist in the wrold. He was born in Shengyang,China in 1982.He started to learn to play piano when he was 3.At the age of 14,he went to US to study music.He give cocerts around the world,and he has performed with many famous musicians. and he has won many prises. I like his performance.When I listen to his music,I feel calm and move.I like him,not only his music,but also he chelenges.