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4. 突然，一只巨大的蚂蚁向她飞快跑去，她很害怕，大声呼救但没人回答。最后她醒过来，原来只是一个梦。
错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；衔接成分偏少。
Hi Martin, Last week I read two articles from the book “Alice in Wonderland” in the English class and they are quite interesting. Last night, I saw Alice was stood near my bed.And she invited me to go to the Wonderland with her.In the Wonderland, I saw mang amazing things:the flowers were dancing like men,and they were gave me a warm welcome.The monkey and fish could flew in the sky,I tried my best to do that,but I failed.All of a sudden,I saw a huge ant was come to me as soon as it could.I felt very scared,and I cried for help but none answerd.After that,I waked up.It just a dream! Isn’t that interesting?
