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2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:47浏览次数:1092
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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 
1.有的人认为应该有回报 
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 
3.我的看法 
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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作者词汇基础扎实;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用。

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it's not-uncommon talking topic if an individual should expect a reward when doing a good deed. as to this issue, opinions vary form person to person. on the one hand, some people hold that people who doing a good deed deserve a reward, such as some money or a glory name. with these reward, more persons can be encouraged to do a good deed. on the other hand, other people maintain that people who doing a good deed is not ask for reward. everyone should learn from Leifeng who is a famous person for he always doing good deeds without asking for reward. as far I am concerned, we can not ask for reward when we are doing a good deed. because it's not like a trade that you provide your service and others pay for you. however, if persons who are helped want to express their gratitude through the way of rewarding, i think we can accept it since it's a polite and respect method.

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