2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少。

Someone like to put all eggs in one basket, but i want to say this is unwise. Because when the basket fall down by uncarefully,all eggs would be broken and at last you got nothing. In our life we can't also put all hopes in one thing and do everything just in a one way without no thinking. We must think that what should we do if this hope is break and this thing we couldn't do better in the same way. If we do that, we can do better than better.