2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量。

Someone likes to put all eggs in one basket, but I want to say this is unwise. for the reason that when the basket falls down by carelessly, all eggs would be broken and at last you got nothing. In our life we can't also give all hopes in one thing and do everything just in the one way without no thinking. It is must for us to think that what should we do if this hope is break and this business we couldn't do better in the same way. provided that we do that, we can do better than better.