2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量。

Someone likes to put all eggs in one basket, but I want to say this is unwise. For the trigger that when the basket falls down by carelessly, all eggs would be broken and eventually you got nothing. In our life we can't also give all hopes in one thing and do everything just in the one way without no thinking. It is must for us to think that what should we do if this hope is break and this business we couldn't do better in the same way. Provided that we do that, we can do better than better.