小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

I have a good friend. Her name is Ciara.She is very a cute girl .She has shoulder hair and two big black eyes.She was born in the Myanmar Shan State.Her skin is very white. Ciara and me is three year Classmate .We are very talkactive so I want to talk about everyday.She is kindness.