2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am very happy to introduce my homtown HeYuan for you.There is an beautiful place ,not only does it surrounded by many pretty mountians,but also it has the most clean lake which called Wan Lu Hu,and many tourists come there from anther cities.Wan Lu Hu's water is supplied to those who live in HANGKONG or others cities.What's more,the air is very flesh and the lake has the most green skin ,that is why called it "Wan Lu Hu".The local people are very enthusiasm and they will cook some delicious food for you.