2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am very happy to introduce my hometown HeYuan for you.There is a beautiful place ,not only does it surrounded by many mountains,but also it has a clean lake which called Wan Lu Hu,and many tourists come there from another cities.Wan Lu Hu's water is supplied to those who live in HANGKONG or other cities.What's more,the air is very flesh, and the lake has a green skin that the lake why called it "Wan Lu Hu".The local people are very enthusiasm and they will cook some delicious food for you.