小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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Holiday is a better day .My Holiday I want to go to the cinema because cinema is very quite and cool so I like this feel . I finished the cinema may I go the shopping and eat a lot of dessert. I am a very eat person.and then I like lonely go to jogging listening music and slow run. I think it is for good health.In the evening I come back home .arrived home time I usually cook dinner with my best friend. it is very delicious. we are finished dinner and then play games with friend.I think it a better holiday.