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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者词汇使用熟练灵活,但要注意避免拼写错误;从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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Two major types of judgments are usually made quickly.Personal decisions can be catastrophic if made without thinking.On the other hand,personal health decisons care workers are definitely trained to make life-changing decisions every day.The wrong personal decision may lead to heartache just as the wrong professional decision could lead to death. Decison involving marriage,family and significant others can be heartbraking,here,if one does not allow time to see the situation from every side,the results might be devastating. These decisions should not be taken lightly.To get married is a prime example.To take this lightly is foolish.the process of deciding takes time and prudence.These are senarios that do not have life and death hanging in the balance.So,one should avail herself of time available. One would certainly hope that decisons made quicly are not always wrong.In fact if that were true,many of our loved ones would not be here with us now. Doctors,namely those in the emergency rooms around the world,are bombarded by situation that requires immediate diagnosis and prognosis.if either is wrong,someone may pay with his life. Firemen face danger in the same manner.Rushing into a burning building,turning to the left and to the right,a fireman must absolutely make the right choice,or die.Others depen on him too.All involved probably know that the stakes are high,any way things go. The difference between personal and professional decisions is usually twofold.The level of training one has prior to making life decisons and the worst possible result are both inextricably wound up together.It is ,then,wise to think in advance.Lastly,it is good that blanket statements do not always ring true.

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